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I made a logo
imaxcs
Member #4,036
November 2003
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Hi there,

Today I made a logo for the project I am currently working on. I also tried to pick "CI colors" but haven't had any success with that yet... but here is the logo:

{"name":"600682","src":"http:\/\/static.allegro.cc\/image\/cache\/9\/0\/905a72b91404d9c05f46793368faa050.gif","w":287,"h":158,"tn":"http:\/\/static.allegro.cc\/image\/cache\/9\/0\/905a72b91404d9c05f46793368faa050"}600682

I am pretty satisfied with the "buttons" but not completely with the text. For example, the "a"s are a bit hard to read.

Anyway, I am asking for opinions, rant, the goods, the bad, whatever! :)

OnlineCop
Member #7,919
October 2006
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Interesting fading effect on the text. Is it a custom font, or a font created dynamically/on-the-fly?

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gnolam
Member #2,030
March 2002
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imaxcs said:

I am pretty satisfied with the "buttons" but not completely with the text. For example, the "a"s are a bit hard to read.

The kerning looks a bit off too, especially around the 'x'. Also, I think the highlight falloff is a bit too low - as it is now, the higlighting gives the whole thing a sort of washed-out look rather than a shiny one (which I guess is what you were aiming for).
Other than that, well... I'm not an artist. :)

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Michael Jensen
Member #2,870
October 2002
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I don't really like the fade effect, it seems like the text was printed on bad paper. Also I think the logo itself is a bit awkward.

Evert
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November 2000
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My first thought: that's not what an exclamation mark looks like.
Neat idea though. I agree that the text looks washed out (looking at it feels as though there's something wrong with my eyes) so you may want to increase the contrast on that. I have no problem with the "a"'s.

imaxcs
Member #4,036
November 2003
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Maybe it helps if I show the logo in context:
{"name":"600686","src":"http:\/\/static.allegro.cc\/image\/cache\/c\/9\/c9156321ee284e6f6f1eeb9da86b50e8.png","w":960,"h":686,"tn":"http:\/\/static.allegro.cc\/image\/cache\/c\/9\/c9156321ee284e6f6f1eeb9da86b50e8"}600686

On most of my sites, there is not much content, just a few links like in the example picture. So I tried to go for big links and buttons and generous free space.

The font is called Nevis bold and it's free! :)
But you are right, it does look washed out.

BTW, I am using web 2.0 gradients to achieve the shiny look.

Also I think the logo itself is a bit awkward.

Could you be a bit more specific?

On a sidenote: I am not able to click on the "attach files" button in Firefox when writing a post. The Javascript error message is:
Fehler: uncaught exception: [Exception... "Operation is not supported" code: "9" nsresult: "0x80530009 (NS_ERROR_DOM_NOT_SUPPORTED_ERR)" location: "http://www.allegro.cc/js/user.js/4036 Line: 2"]

verthex
Member #11,340
September 2009
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There's a lack of balance in your design. Basically it looks as though your "Exclamation Mark" phrase is hanging on the edge of a set of points. Not that its bad, because it does imply something like falling off a CLIFFFFFFFF!!!!!!!!!

In a way its a good lack of balance. I think the colors need changing, like mixing white with green and black is not a good idea. Stay away from warm colors unless you plan on making it look crazy. I think blueish would help it and change the font to
noir style (It doesnt have to be that font), something easy to read, no fading but nothing like the Blade Runner font. And don't use serifs.

P.S. I got A's in design and drawing, though I never used it for anything pro.

Paul whoknows
Member #5,081
September 2004
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I don't like it at all, IMO you should consider the idea of start from scratch again.

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bamccaig
Member #7,536
July 2006
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verthex
Member #11,340
September 2009
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bamccaig said:

Want to try a logo for Castopulence [www.castopulence.org]? :P

You could try one of these fonts. The site just needs you to try your name for one font and then it stays in their system.

I put a "/" next to all the ones I really liked and I totally recommend SDF. You may need to pay 20 bucks for commercial use but you can play with these for free. You might also wanna create a doctored version of your logo with the font instead of just using a plain font.

http://www.1001freefonts.com/HammaMammaJamma.php

http://www.1001freefonts.com/Antigrav.php

http://www.1001freefonts.com/Ethnocentric.php

http://www.1001freefonts.com/Fabian.php

http://www.1001freefonts.com/Galga.php

http://www.1001freefonts.com/Gunship.php /

http://www.1001freefonts.com/Hyperion.php

http://www.1001freefonts.com/Nasal.php /

http://www.1001freefonts.com/Nasalization.php

http://www.1001freefonts.com/Neuropolitical.php

http://www.1001freefonts.com/Overload.php /

http://www.1001freefonts.com/Promethean.php /

http://www.1001freefonts.com/SDF.php /

http://www.1001freefonts.com/TapeWorm.php /

http://www.1001freefonts.com/DestructoBeam.php /

http://www.1001freefonts.com/MetroDF.php /

http://www.1001freefonts.com/Yahoo.php

EDIT: The 19.99 dollar charge gets you all their fonts, nevermind.

imaxcs
Member #4,036
November 2003
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Thanks for your input! I really appreciate it. :)

But I can't help it, I am getting really lost.

Here's what I am at right now...

{"name":"600692","src":"http:\/\/static.allegro.cc\/image\/cache\/d\/4\/d462f5efb93263a7a05baedb6f85e822.jpg","w":1000,"h":761,"tn":"http:\/\/static.allegro.cc\/image\/cache\/d\/4\/d462f5efb93263a7a05baedb6f85e822"}600692

{"name":"600695","src":"http:\/\/static.allegro.cc\/image\/cache\/8\/4\/841e7f439a4167831363c935b2c52404.png","w":500,"h":182,"tn":"http:\/\/static.allegro.cc\/image\/cache\/8\/4\/841e7f439a4167831363c935b2c52404"}600695

The more I do, the less sure I get of anything. :(

Damn, I just want a cool web 2.0 logo... :(

bamccaig
Member #7,536
July 2006
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Can you at least explain the dots? ???

imaxcs said:

Damn, I just want a cool web 2.0 logo... :(

Me too. :(

imaxcs
Member #4,036
November 2003
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bamccaig said:

Can you at least explain the dots?

No, no reason. Just thought they were cool looking at first. I guess I was wrong.

bamccaig
Member #7,536
July 2006
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verthex
Member #11,340
September 2009
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bamccaig said:

I think they look fine. It's just confusing.

Throw a dog a bone, what do you expect?

imaxcs said:

No, no reason. Just thought they were cool looking at first. I guess I was wrong.

I guess the dots could could somehow represent an exclamation mark, but you could maybe make one out of many tiny dots creating an image. I'm sure theres some plugin for GIMP or PS that could make one. Maybe making a gif of your logo with a cool exclamation mark fading in and out effect. Also try inverting the color of your logo, you'll be surprised that it looks twisted and evil.

Here

{"name":"600697","src":"http:\/\/static.allegro.cc\/image\/cache\/c\/3\/c34c372cb1d8f35758cbc90df15c847c.png","w":500,"h":182,"tn":"http:\/\/static.allegro.cc\/image\/cache\/c\/3\/c34c372cb1d8f35758cbc90df15c847c"}600697

{"name":"600698","src":"http:\/\/static.allegro.cc\/image\/cache\/4\/a\/4ab06607fe02d6a6bc710b7b5449bc71.jpg","w":287,"h":158,"tn":"http:\/\/static.allegro.cc\/image\/cache\/4\/a\/4ab06607fe02d6a6bc710b7b5449bc71"}600698

Felix-The-Ghost
Member #9,729
April 2008
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Eh.
{"name":"600700","src":"http:\/\/static.allegro.cc\/image\/cache\/7\/d\/7d553ced85dce2f88c35c4bbaa2ae0f2.png","w":351,"h":152,"tn":"http:\/\/static.allegro.cc\/image\/cache\/7\/d\/7d553ced85dce2f88c35c4bbaa2ae0f2"}600700
So what's this project?

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bamccaig
Member #7,536
July 2006
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The dots could represent the bits in the UTF-8 character '!'[1] (you'll only need 8 though). I don't know if that would be appropriate for the site though.

References

  1. 00100001/0x21/33
LennyLen
Member #5,313
December 2004
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imaxcs said:

Here's what I am at right now...

The top one looks like a stylized version of something from Conway's Game of Life. Maybe you could make a Hacker Emblem" version.

imaxcs
Member #4,036
November 2003
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The project is an attempt at a assessment software where users can create tests, let others take them online, grade and analyze them.
Functionality-wise, I am somewhere at the level of TCExam.

To be honest, the name "ExclamationMark" was just a quick shot and a working title, because the leading (proprietary) software in this sector is called "QuestionMark". I don't really dig it anymore. Still fishing for a better name. Maybe something like this, I don't know:

{"name":"600703","src":"http:\/\/static.allegro.cc\/image\/cache\/9\/a\/9a6d8388a09787d1099d586a45ecc7d7.gif","w":300,"h":124,"tn":"http:\/\/static.allegro.cc\/image\/cache\/9\/a\/9a6d8388a09787d1099d586a45ecc7d7"}600703

{"name":"600704","src":"http:\/\/static.allegro.cc\/image\/cache\/7\/4\/7462060dcfe0fc4058e062986a542fdd.png","w":300,"h":124,"tn":"http:\/\/static.allegro.cc\/image\/cache\/7\/4\/7462060dcfe0fc4058e062986a542fdd"}600704

Felix-The-Ghost
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April 2008
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That's awesome.

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